Examine Mubarak’s policy towards Najd 1900-1915.
This is the argument or thesis of your essay. Write your argument in no more than 2-3 paragraphs.
For example, “This paper argues that… “, “The main claim of this essay is… ” or “The thesis statement in this essay is… ”
The argument is your main claim or opinion based on your research.
Please read social science journal ABSTRACTS to see how arguments, main claim or thesis statements are written.
ESSAY DRAFT COMMENT (FEEDBACK):
” This paper argues that Sheikh Mubarak was a strategic leader who could defeat his enemies and do away with the continuous threat to Kuwait.”
Please make sure the body of the essay contains evidence to support the above claim.
(Al-Saif,2021), not proper citation. (author surname page number) e.g. (Al-Saif 67).
I have uploaded my previous draft for you to use as guidance, because the above comment was about what my essay draft lacked. So, you can use the draft as guidance.